Selling speech

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Hello everybody!
I'm so sorry for lack of my posts. I have problems with my health, unfortunately. But now I'm here and I want to tell you about my selling speech.


I did the analysis according to the chart from the book (evaluating speech content component):
1. Introduction - 5 points.
I used the question form for introduction and reality wasn't so good as I expected.
2. Body:
Organization - 6 points
How understandable was the information? - 7 points. 
Quality of point - support - 5 points
Use of facts, examples, illustrations, stories - 3 points.
Was it coherent? - 6 points
3. Conclusion - 6 points
There are lots of things that I didn't like. For example, I had a lot of pauses in my speech and my voice was so quiet. Also my voice seemed so unconfident. 
But there was one thing, that I very liked. I liked my eye-contact with auditory. It was very difficult for me.

 I have lots of mistakes, I'm not worry so much about it. I know my mistakes and try to work hard. 

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  1. Yulia Rychkova6 октября 2018 г. в 14:06

    Hi! Welcome back! I hope you feel better now.
    Nice speech, but there was another chart to evaluate it (Know Thyself). So may want to go over it and add some reflections on your speech.

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